Five conventional ways of putting sentences together.
View these as options, options to give your sentences variety and
rhythm.
(Note that the highlighted rules are examples.)
1. The most common are conjunctions: and, but, or, so, (nor, yet, for)
(fanboys).
Rule:
Usually two independent clauses (in effect, sentences) are joined by a
conjunction, but
a comma must be placed before the conjunction.
2. The most useful are adverb clauses (although, when, because, since,
until, if etc.). These words convert an entire sentence into an adverb. For example: When
these words convert an entire sentence into an adverb . . .
Rule:
When you use an initial adverb clause,
place a comma after it.
Do not use a comma when you use a final adverb clause.
Notice the rule also illustrates that adverb clauses can move around in
a sentence. Adverbs are really the only parts of speech that are easy to shuffle in this
way.
3. The hardest to remember how to punctuate is sentence connectors:
(however, moreover, furthermore, as a matter of fact, additionally etc.) The two-dollar
term for these is adverbial conjunctions, so they can also move around in sentences.
Rule:
Don't hesitate to use sentence connectors; however, remember to surround the
connector with punctuation.
Don't hesitate to use sentence connector; remember, however, to surround the
connector with punctuation.
Don't hesitate to use sentence connectors; remember to surround the connector with
punctuation, however.
4. The shortest is the semicolon: ;
Rule:
Use semicolons sparingly; use them to connect sentences connected in meaning.
(And remember that a semicolon is not the one used to introduce a list. The colon (:) is.
5. The powerful one, the verbal. Think about employing some of the
thousands of verbs in sentence combining.
Quasi-rule:
Poised at the beginning of a sentence,
the verbal construction was followed by a
comma.
Or an example closer to home: The paper is graded by a computer. The
paper is then ready for student revision.
Could become: Graded by a computer, the paper is then ready for
student revision.
Be careful not to mislead or confuse the reader; check to make sure
there is a referent for the verbal construction in the sentence (italicized in the
sentence above). And contrast that sentence with the one below where the reference may be
ambiguous:
Graded by a computer, the teacher can then return the papers.
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